[fic] Coffee Hell
May. 4th, 2012 04:48 pmTitle: Coffee Hell
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing: Homin
Rating: G
Words: 363
A/N: Um, a coffee centered drabble for
isaofdoom? Cause, you see, I'm supposed to be writing my essay right now. Sorry that this is so luckluster and short ;;
Comments as always very appreciated.
Fandom: Dong Bang Shin Ki
Pairing: Homin
Rating: G
Words: 363
A/N: Um, a coffee centered drabble for
Shim Changmin couldn’t care less about many things. If something weren’t an object of his direct interest, then you probably would be better of saving your breath instead of asking.
But there were some things that he was particular about. Food being one of them – Shim Changmin could be called a connoisseur, and coffee - the other. The intricacies of the flavour, the just right amount of milk and sugar, the aroma, the artfulness of the foam – they all mattered. Changmin knew his coffee.
And yet here he was, at this no name store, sipping some dubious liquid that hardly could be called a drink, let alone proper coffee. Even more – here he was again - the third time in this week alone and it was barely Thursday, too!
Sighing, he took another mindless swig from his large cup and almost spit it out right back. He forced himself to swallow, bursting into a short fit of coughing afterwards.
“Are you alright?” a worried baritone reached his ears and he lifted his eyes and, yes. Here was the - very embarrassing - reason as to why he subjected himself to this inhuman treatment on almost daily basis.
His gaze centered on the most gorgeous guy ever – tall, well built but not overly muscled (his arms though, oh God), long legged and with handsome face adorned with small almond shaped eyes, regal slope of a nose and the warmest, brightest smile he’s ever been given.
Yunho, as the nameplate on his chest helpfully informed – the embodiment of Changmin’s dreams. Also, the maker of the worst coffee that this world had ever seen.
“Y-yes, I’m fine,” he stuttered out (stuttered!) and Yunho grinned at him in reply.
“Continue enjoying your drink, then!” he beamed at Changmin with even bigger force – was it even possible? If you asked him a minute ago, he’d say it wasn’t but the reality begged to differ.
“Thank you! I will for sure,” his treacherous mouth lied and Yunho gave him another of these damn, irresistible smiles, and his heart proved to be an even more awful traitor as it skipped a beat.
Put simply, Shim Changmin was so, so screwed.
But there were some things that he was particular about. Food being one of them – Shim Changmin could be called a connoisseur, and coffee - the other. The intricacies of the flavour, the just right amount of milk and sugar, the aroma, the artfulness of the foam – they all mattered. Changmin knew his coffee.
And yet here he was, at this no name store, sipping some dubious liquid that hardly could be called a drink, let alone proper coffee. Even more – here he was again - the third time in this week alone and it was barely Thursday, too!
Sighing, he took another mindless swig from his large cup and almost spit it out right back. He forced himself to swallow, bursting into a short fit of coughing afterwards.
“Are you alright?” a worried baritone reached his ears and he lifted his eyes and, yes. Here was the - very embarrassing - reason as to why he subjected himself to this inhuman treatment on almost daily basis.
His gaze centered on the most gorgeous guy ever – tall, well built but not overly muscled (his arms though, oh God), long legged and with handsome face adorned with small almond shaped eyes, regal slope of a nose and the warmest, brightest smile he’s ever been given.
Yunho, as the nameplate on his chest helpfully informed – the embodiment of Changmin’s dreams. Also, the maker of the worst coffee that this world had ever seen.
“Y-yes, I’m fine,” he stuttered out (stuttered!) and Yunho grinned at him in reply.
“Continue enjoying your drink, then!” he beamed at Changmin with even bigger force – was it even possible? If you asked him a minute ago, he’d say it wasn’t but the reality begged to differ.
“Thank you! I will for sure,” his treacherous mouth lied and Yunho gave him another of these damn, irresistible smiles, and his heart proved to be an even more awful traitor as it skipped a beat.
Put simply, Shim Changmin was so, so screwed.
Comments as always very appreciated.
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Date: 2012-05-04 04:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-05-05 12:25 am (UTC)Thanks for the comment!
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Date: 2012-05-05 12:12 am (UTC)I know you and while this most likely will join the "abandoned" fics (;_;), its sooo cute. There will never be enough.
By the way, the second to last paragraph, did you intend to keep both Yunho's and Changmin's dialogues in one paragraph together? It works but normally you're not taught to so I wondered.
(And yes, this is really me, abbytaby, commenting. Sorry it took so long.)
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Date: 2012-05-05 12:22 am (UTC)And this is ofc her fault, hence the dedication. We've had this huge convo once and a coffee shop!Homin was a big part of it and it's been on my mind ever since. But I neither drink nor like coffee myself? XD I'm the last person that should be writing such an AU. And this. Hmm, you're probably right :< Though I'd like to write more of this for Isa~
I did intend it cause I felt like I've seen it this way somewhere? But if it's not exactly correct, I'll change it. We have a different way of writing down dialogues in Polish, will send you an example at twitter~
But thank you <3 Glad you liked this, as short as it is XD
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Date: 2012-05-05 04:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-05-05 11:20 am (UTC)Thank you for commenting ♥
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Date: 2012-05-05 09:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-05-05 11:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-05-05 10:56 am (UTC)Brilliant and Changmin you are screwed....big time. ^__^
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Date: 2012-05-05 11:22 am (UTC)Thank you for reading and commenting ♥
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Date: 2012-05-05 05:31 pm (UTC)i also drew you a thing based on it, that's why i was stupidly slow at commenting so helloooooooo this is amazing. m(_ _)m thank you! ♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2012-05-05 06:23 pm (UTC)and omg, the thing!! *__* it put such a huge stupid grin on my face, you don't know. but ofc, you're exaggerating, lol. this doesn't deserve such praises XDD
♥♥♥
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Date: 2012-05-06 07:16 am (UTC)Changmin, fighting!
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Date: 2012-05-06 03:19 pm (UTC)eeek, such a cute fanart~!
Thanks for the comment!