Funnily enough (and I cant recall if I said this last time we talked about it), 2nd POV is something I associate with early 20s in a writer! One of my friends used it consistently (and to devastating effect) until she hit 25 and she's since switched to 3rd!
I find a lot of your writing focuses on emotions and thoughts, even when it's not stated directly. I'm thinking of the clockwork heart fic particularly because the emotion in that was very subtle. Also the dream creation fic, you let actions speak for emotion there but in an understated way. So I agree that 2nd POV does have an intimacy and thus a focus on emotion and thought but it goes all the way through your writing.
I guess with F1 it's because the drivers are very insular when they're in the car, idk *__*
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Date: 2012-12-22 08:40 pm (UTC)I find a lot of your writing focuses on emotions and thoughts, even when it's not stated directly. I'm thinking of the clockwork heart fic particularly because the emotion in that was very subtle. Also the dream creation fic, you let actions speak for emotion there but in an understated way. So I agree that 2nd POV does have an intimacy and thus a focus on emotion and thought but it goes all the way through your writing.
I guess with F1 it's because the drivers are very insular when they're in the car, idk *__*